I worked and it stayed
though a day’s bright sun
passed low ‘cross the sky
Took no heed to disperse
and let us live our lives
still frozen, still chained
a lifeless 2D
a brief breathless beauty
outdone its welcome
too sharp
count colourless crystals
cold, cutting
to sleep listless –
no,
lifeless –
as death.
Great poem, although I’m too tired at the moment to work out waht it’s about. Even better tags – you’re so good at that. Always leave ’em laughing…
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Thank you as ever, Jane 🙂 I was trying for obscurity but that tags were then meant to be enlightening…and amusing of course!
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Thanks for the one about frost…
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I’m glad you appreciated that one 😉
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